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I dont mean to be a sick comment-hungry savage beast but I'd really appreciate comments. This piece is incredibly important to me. :noes: Thank you!!!!!!!!! :squee:

Oh wow... this took way too long.

This is 1 of 4 pieces in a dream series that does not yet have a title. This is for my Senior Project and if I don't do well on this then I AM NOT GRADUATING. Naw I'm jk I just won't get a job and I'll stay home, become a bum, and never draw again. D:

Need Critique Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111112three Please help by critiquing my piece before I have it printed and framed and shown to all my professors!

It's a dream I had when I was younger. I was in some barren land but a beautiful white deer found me and let me on its back and it swiftly ran through the barren land and the path where it walked became grassy.

Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase help me. I need to graduate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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:iconrinjiii:
Wow, this is Beautiful! All I have to say is that you did a perfect job :D
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:iconjennywheat:
~JennyWheat May 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh thank you so much!!! I'm so happy you think so!!!! :love:
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:iconrinjiii:
Your Welcome :D
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~Bewildermunster May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think you did a nice job! I think I would have preferred real deer hooves to points, and the little girls dress doesn't seem 'flowy' enough, but other than that the background and colors are beautiful. :)
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~JennyWheat May 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much for your comment and critique!!! :hug: I really appreciate your feedback.
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*electrifried Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg I LOVEE the waterfall clouds!! It's pretty much perfect. :)
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~Windy-Fox Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have dreams like this.
:D
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Mood: Love ~Windy-Fox Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My new favorite art piece! No need for critique, its perfect.
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:icondragonshadow1704:
it looks amazing, i would suggest patching up the bottom cloud holding the water, it looks like it should be spilling more because the cloud looks open you know? like if you were pouring a glass of water and only one side was pouring out? sorry if this is confusing.
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:iconremenescent:
This is awesome! The detail, the water, and I love the legs.
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